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Talent Showcase Story Feedback 5 months 2 weeks ago #114313

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Hi everyone!
I hope that you are having a great morning!
I was just hoping to acquire some feedback about my stories from you.
Do you still enjoy reading my stories? Is there something that I can improve upon?
Please, let me know what you think!
I want to give you the highest quality entertainment possible! :silly:
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Laughed in the sun, and kissed the lovely grass." Rupert Brooke

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Talent Showcase Story Feedback 5 months 2 weeks ago #114323

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Catchild77 wrote:
Hi everyone!
I hope that you are having a great morning!
I was just hoping to acquire some feedback about my stories from you.
Do you still enjoy reading my stories? Is there something that I can improve upon?
Please, let me know what you think!
I want to give you the highest quality entertainment possible! :silly:

I enjoy reading your stories!

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Great is the LORD and most worthy of praise; his greatness no one can fathom.
Psalm 145:3
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Talent Showcase Story Feedback 5 months 1 week ago #114688

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JoyBaker wrote:
Catchild77 wrote:
Hi everyone!
I hope that you are having a great morning!
I was just hoping to acquire some feedback about my stories from you.
Do you still enjoy reading my stories? Is there something that I can improve upon?
Please, let me know what you think!
I want to give you the highest quality entertainment possible! :silly:

I enjoy reading your stories!
Thank you so much, JoyBaker! I'm so glad that you do! I'll be sure to write more of them! :cheer:
Writing is one of the best ways to explore the world around you.

"Breathless, we flung us on the windy hill,
Laughed in the sun, and kissed the lovely grass." Rupert Brooke

Love is one of the greatest adventures that you'll ever lead.
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Talent Showcase Story Feedback 5 months 1 week ago #114824

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I love your stories! I enjoy the historical themes and the obstacles the protagonists encounter even after overcoming some other obstacle (for example, how May's face gets frostbitten after she convinces December to help her).
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Talent Showcase Story Feedback 5 months 1 week ago #114849

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sci_geeek wrote:
I love your stories! I enjoy the historical themes and the obstacles the protagonists encounter even after overcoming some other obstacle (for example, how May's face gets frostbitten after she convinces December to help her).
Thanks for the feedback, sci_geeek!
Initially, I wasn't sure whether or not to include this detail in the story, because of its tragic nature, but I decided to incorporate May's frostbite for the sake of realism.
You could probably guess this but, I LOVE history! Sometimes, I come up with imaginary friends from history who have provided the creative inspiration for many of my stories. They're usually inspired by films or books that I've read, like Dickens' A Tale of Two Cities.
Writing is one of the best ways to explore the world around you.

"Breathless, we flung us on the windy hill,
Laughed in the sun, and kissed the lovely grass." Rupert Brooke

Love is one of the greatest adventures that you'll ever lead.
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